增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;作者高级词汇方面要多累积,词汇表达不够丰富;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
I have a good friend. About ten years ago, I was met him nearby my school. He is tall and handsome. He likes playing bedminton,but I don't like it. We have talked to each other for a long period,but now we no longer cantect with each other.I hope he have good life.