增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活,但文中词汇表达丰富度不足;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
I have a good friend. I was met him nearby my school about ten years ago. He is tall and handsome. He likes playing badminton, but I don't like it. We have talked to each other for a long period,but now we no longer centact with each other.I hope he have good life.