正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
I have a good friend. I was met him nearby my school about ten years ago. He is tall and handsome. He likes playing badminton, but I don't like it. We have talked to each other for a long period,but now we no longer contact with each other.I hope he has a good life.