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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;从句数量不足,可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用。

用户练习作文:

In recent years,there is a common phenomenon that people change their appearance by all kinds of means,such as plastic surgery,cosmetic and so on.This result contributes to discussion that people judge a person by his appearance or not.It is obvious that the glorious appearance does not indicate everything. There are tremendous reasons reflect this viewpoint that judging a person by his appearance is insensible.First of all,as we all know that charming appearance does not replace strong heart.solving many problem by strong heart rather than beautiful external.What is more,although good appearance is more likely to leave unforgettable impression for people at the first sight,we can have genuine friendship by inner communication.In the end,the best glamorous appearance also changes by time goes,but affection and friendship is perpetual. In my opinion, it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.only with inner sincere and pure,can we attain a colorful life.

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