2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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It's my pleasure to take my foreign friend to visit my hometown last weekend. It's known that there is many interesting place in China. Such as GuangZhou. We went to the BaiYun park. There is a various of flowers and so many people in there. Maybe that day was weekend and the weather is very good,there were many children in the park with their parients. I can feel their were very enjoyable.Then we took the subway to the second place-Beijing Road.We saw many clothes so we were very excited.She told me the different between the chinese clothes and their clothes.The most important was eating. We ate many chinese food and she was very enjoy the tasty and delicious food. I am very happy i can be a "guide"and if have time next day, i will take her to more place to know my country's customers.