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Financial disparity always would not disappear only if there are different people in the world.People with different backgrounds may have diverse financial places.Whether financial gap would affect people's friendship or not is drawing our attention today.While some people say no,others might be with yes.In my case,the disparity in finance would truly make friendship different. This will be expressed as follow:firstly,getting along with a friend who is from different financial background,richer or poorer than you is likely to be hard.Try to imagine that if you go out for a meal with him,the rich one may be delighted to a luxurious restaurant where you cannot afford even a lunch and the poor one probably does not want to go out just for saving money even you only want to eat noodles outside.And you do not wish to lose their friendships but you do not know how to do.As a result,you find that it is so tough to make a friend.It is naturally following my second reason,making friends with someone who is in the similar financial condition as yours has great possibility to make you gain more and true friendship.On account of the similar background,he may enjoys alike values with you.For example,you two would have the same feelings about each other's childhood without much money but full of true happiness.Therefore,you would suppose that money is not the most important thing,happiness is.Lastly,I want to say that there would be many conflicts along with friends who have financial disparity with us.Because their lifestyles must be different from ours.While a rich friend is always enjoying services from others,we are invariably self-served.If we are together to do something like cooking,they must be free there and you are working.You may ask them to wash vegetables but they refuse.At this time,you may be angry and speak out and then come a conflict. In a conclusion,financial gap may affect friendship.And the results may be having a difficulty to get on with friends from diverse financial condition,making more good friends who almost have no financial disparity with you and suffering lots of obstacles like owing total different lifestyles.So it is may be better to have friends who have similar financial background with you.
