2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

作者能较准确地使用学术词汇，但文章中拼写错误稍多；全文结构较为严谨；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

With the rapid development of techology,now in contemporary society there are variety of ways to communicate.Other than have face-to-face talk,smartphone as well as Internet give rise to a new way to communicate which is more fashionable and convenient. The popularity of Internet and smartphone,to some extend,demonstrating people‘s awareness of the significance of exchange . Maybe you might wonder why communication is so vital.Personally speaking,I mantain that human,as a species live in the community,should learn to exchange with others in order to get well along with them.Morever,Commuicating is beneficial for us to keep metal health,as numerous indivuduals suffer from phychological problems oweing to lack of communication.Lastly,harmony atmosphere in society is also created by the mysterious power of communication. To brief conclude,communication has played and is playing more significant role in today's society.In order to achieve a harmonious society,more emphasis should be putted on the advocate of interactive communication.