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Now it exist a phenomenon that the packaging of goods is much excessive. To enbody the value of the commodities, business men wrap many levels to the goods. Sometimes the good becomes much bigger than its real size through packaging. And the design of the surface of the goods is luxury. To be honest, appropriate packaging brings more sales volume. But many business men make the use of the packaging to enhance the price of the goods. The price on the lable of the goods is higher than its real value. People pay more money on its packaging. In fact, the public want to spare the packaging money to buy more things. Excessive packaging wastes both the energy of the business men and money belonging to individuals. At the same time, the excessive packaging turn to be unuseful after indivuduals remove it. The value of its existence is transient and small. So i think business men should pay terribly attention on the quality of the goods not its packaging. Simple packaging including essential ingredients is enough to the public.
