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字数:300 满分:100分
复杂句使用不错,句法规范;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误。
Be a smart consumer Nowadays,with the development of economy,more and more students become rich than before.Bue they also would like to spend their money on the goods in a sale and to get the coupons to make the goods more cheap.In my opinion,I think it is a good habit. The reasons are obvious.Firstly,we don't have the ability to earn some money.Most of money we own are given by our parents,so as a student we should be careful with our money in daily life to release our parents' burden.Secondly,if everyone spent a lot of money in their daily life,they would become more absorbed in buying more expensive things .The students wold become to compare with others and to show up their things.Moreover,be careful with everything is our virture,such as we should not waste water,electority,woods and so on. All in all,we should make a good manage on our daily spending.And take more interested in study.