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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9037
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇表达较恰当,也能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;可适当增加从句的使用,注意几处句子错误。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,Internet play an important role in our lives.meanwhile ,It is more and more popularity。Education is a scholarship,which it is not simply study it. Fist ,learning a knowledge need to master learning skills ,and form insight to out to study. Second.when we study from internet,we should realized it.For example ,when we look for someone form internet,we need to know,why were you do it,and why it is good for me.finally, learning internet is not always good for us.

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