小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；应增加文中从句的使用；请作者增加词汇丰富度。

I have a good friend, he is very beautiful boy, he come from Guanddong,and he is like smile, he is like football,he will to play football when he is not work time. his name is jackly, he is twenty years,and he have a beautiful sister, and them both work in my company.