小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；从句使用偏少；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

I have a good friend, he is comes from Dongduan province, and he is likes play football, so, he will platy it when he doesn't wok. His name is Jack, he is twenty years now, and he is likes smile, and he is handsome boys, and he has a beautiful smaller sister, and them work in my company.