小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；文中从句数量不足；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

I have a good friend, he comes from Dongduan province, and he likes football, thus, he will play it when he doesn't wok. His name is Jack, he is twenty years now, and he likes smile, and he is a handsome boy, and he has a beautiful sister, and they all work in our company.