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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40897
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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

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Living in the current circumstance society,the adolescents lack the ability to distinguish the right and wrong.Once we are faced with problems ,we may be afraid and perplexed .Many people turn to their parents for help.On the other hand ,they are short of ability of analysis and calm consideration,thus, a problem hit upon them,they will straight arrive at a conclusion according to what they see and hear.As far as I can see ,it's inadvisable.In view of this situation ,I hold that there are following measures to help the adolescents grow to maturity.First of all,parents should never follow children's will at every thins,just like the slaves,parents needn't pack the smooth road for the children's future.Parents can let them alone,let themselves work out the setback as a result it can test children's stress tolerance.Besides,parents should encourage them to take full consideration on the problems.

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