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Today is a very busy day.In the morning,i help my mother do some husework,such as clearing the house、watering the flowers. In the afternoon,i do my homework.It's very difficult . I spent much time to finish it.After a while,my parents called me to play pingpong.I am very happy.After the dinner,my mother 、 my father and i watched TV.Not only that,i ate any food.How busy day i have!
