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Nowaday , Becuase of the popular of Internet ,less people focus on reading ,but there still less people willing spend more time in reading,they keep this traditional . some people think read book need selectively ,it must useful for him or can used in the life , ,but most of them lose the happiness to reading . Some people think read book can extensively ,it must read by their interesting or hobby ,but most of them can not reap much after reading . In my opinion ,reading need combine selectively and extensively?On the one hand ,make a plan of some book can useful for your life .On the other hand , read some book you interested ,then you not only learn some skill but also enjoy the happiness of reading .