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when my friends comes to my hometown, I will take them visit Confuto feeling chinese Confucianism .then take them visit weishan lake in weishan town to taste fishing feast.next i will take them to visit jinxiang county Garlic deep processing workshop.then take break one day then send them back to airport of jining.