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When my friend went to my hometown, I would take them to visit the Confucius Temple in Qufu to feel the Chinese Confucian culture. Then we will take them to boating the Weishan Lake to taste the fishman feast. after that we will go to Jinxiang County to visit the modern garlic deep processing shop, furthermore, the tour free rest day, and finally sent them to Jining Airport。