有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;从句使用很不错,再接再厉。
Nowadays , Becuase of the popular of Internet ,less and less people focus on reading ,but there still less people willing spend more time in reading,they keep this tradition . some people think reading book need selectively ,it must useful for him or can used in the life , ,but most of them lose the happiness to reading . Some people think reading book can extensively ,it must follow their hobby ,but most of them can not reap much after reading . In my opinion,reading need combine selectively with extensively?On the one hand ,make a plan to read book is useful for your life .On the other hand , read some book you are interested ,then you not only learn some skill but also enjoy the happiness of reading .