有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;从句使用很不错,再接再厉。
Nowadays,Becuase of the popular of Internet,less and less people focus on reading,but there still less people willing spend more time in reading,they keep this tradition. some people think reading book need selectively,it must useful for him or can used in the life,but most of them lose the happiness to reading . Some people think reading book can extensively,it must follow their hobby ,but most of them can not reap much after reading. In my opinion,reading need combine selectively with extensively?On the one hand ,make a plan to read book is useful for your life.On the other hand,read some book you are interested,then you not only learn some skill but also enjoy the happiness of reading .