作者在句法层面做的很棒;文章高级词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;文章层次不够清晰。
When my friend went to my hometown, I would take them to visit the Confucius Temple in Qufu to feel the Chinese Confucian culture. Subsequently we will take them to go boating on the Weishan Lake to enjoy the Fishing feast. After that we will go to Jinxiang County to visit deep processing of garlic, Furthermore, take a day off, and finally sent them to Jining Airport。