作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富。
When my friend went to my hometown, I would take them to visit the Confucius Temple in Qufu to feel the Chinese Confucian culture.
Subsequently we will take them to go boating on the Weishan Lake to enjoy the Fishing feast.
There after,We went to Shuibo Liangshan, to visit one of four famous Chinese