有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文中较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇量仍需积累。
When my friend went to my hometown, I would take them to visit the Confucius Temple in Qufu to feel the Chinese Confucian culture. Subsequently we will take them to go boating on the Weishan Lake to enjoy the Fishing feast. There after,we went to Shuibo Liangshan, where is bithday of the chinese famous to see Liangshan heroes party place。 After that we will go to Jinxiang County to visit deep processing of garlic, Furthermore, take a day off, and finally sent them to Jining Airport。