Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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At the present social ,more and more people focus on collage degree.In the compus is all of the students have access to place.Howerer,accomplish to stand of degree is so hard. the image on show increasingly students trend to higher degree,so when we are find a decent job is hard complace with others.