2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少；文中词汇表达多样性要加强，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

What is successful ?A bussienss man says"Earn more and more money is sucessful ".A Science days "Creat new technogloy is sucessful ". A teacher days "The students sucess is sucessful". How to suceed ?In my opinion ,sucess doesn't means the amount of money you earn ,because different people have different ways to become sucess .The way to success is reach your aim and you can get something material or spirit after your endeavor .