2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；请作者仔细检查词汇的拼写，同时高级词汇量还要多多积累；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

What is successful ?A bussienss man says"Earn more and more money is sucessful ".A Science days "Creat new technogloy is sucessful ". A teacher days "The students sucess is sucessful". How to suceed ?In my opinion ,sucess doesn't means the amount of money you earn ,because different people have different ways to become sucess .The way to success is reach your aim and you can get something material or spirit after your endeavor . Why we need success ?A sucessful people alway with health mind to their life ,we need make a long plan , today we may not sucess but we can do more and more things that we eager to do our best one day .We need sucess , it is the purpose why we live in the world .