2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping In the past of decades,most of people went shopping in a physical store by themselves. But nowadays,with the devolopment of internet,almost all of the young people shopping onlline.Online shopping markedly become a fashion thing.why people like this way?It maybe a lot of reason.some people think shopping on internet have mang diffrent choice,because all sorts of goods which you can buy,like clothes,cosmetics ,furniture and so on.Anoter reason can be you need not take by yourself,there is a Courier company to send to your door. Everything has his diffrent aspects.it is unsafe shopping online.We can not see the goods with our own eyes,it maybe obstruct your judgement. I suggest you should not buy expensive goods online,it can reduce your loss.