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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9564
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
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1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分64.0分
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错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。

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My views on Online Shopping In the past few decades, most of people went shopping in a physical store by themselves. But nowadays, with the devolopment of internet, almost all of the young people go shopping online. Online shopping markedly becomes a fashion thing. why do people like this way? It maybe a lot of reasons. some people think shopping on internet have many diffrent choice,because all sorts of goods which you can buy, like clothes, cosmetics , furniture and so on. Anoter reason can be you need not take by yourself, there is a Courier company to send to your door. Everything has his diffrent aspects. It is unsafe shopping online.We can not see the goods with our own eyes, it maybe obstructes your judgement. I suggest you should not buy expensive goods online, it can reduce your loss.

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