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My views on Online Shopping In the past few decades, most of people went shopping in a physical store by themselves. But nowadays, with the devolopment of internet, almost all of the young people go shopping online. Online shopping markedly becomes a fashion thing. why do people like this way? It may be a lot of reasons. some people think shopping on internet have many diffrent choices,because all sorts of goods which you can buy, like clothes, cosmetics , furniture and so on. Anoter reason can be you need not take by yourself, there is a Courier company to send to your door. Everything has his diffrent aspects. It is unsafe shopping online.We can not see the goods with our own eyes, it maybe obstructs your judgement. I suggest you should not buy expensive goods online, it can reduce your loss.
