小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；从句使用量不足；文中词汇表达较为丰富，但高级词汇比较少，单词拼写要也加强。

i have a good friend, her name is lili, wealway play togather in the school. she is good at study, all the teacher and student like to play with her, me too. she also can make fun and let people feel so comfortable after talking to her. and she is a beautiful girl, has a long black hair, s white face. not only a good looking girl, but also a clever child.