托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用高级词汇，望继续努力；作者句法知识扎实，但从句稍微偏少；有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰。

Now the online education is a very popular form in the world. More and more people use this form to improve themselves. Not only online education is convenience and flexibility but also it could not replace or influence normal order of education. There are several reasons for that. Firstly, human beings are lazy animals, such as students self-disciplined and attention. It’s hard for people to concentrate for a long time. When students discuss with each other, the active classroom atmosphere can improve the passion of students at class that online education could not realize. For example when student can’t catch up with study process they may give up. At this moment, their teacher will give them encourage and advice to help them, but online education cannot do that. Secondly, it’s easy to cheating without supervise. For example, when student do his test, he can call his classmates or search answer online. So he still can get great score because computer could not know that and cancel his test score. Cheating is the most failure in education, moreover, out of classroom and teachers’ supervision. Thirdly, in the school teacher know student’s advantage and shortcoming, then they could give suitable suggestions for each of students. For example, people had a poor life because their village’s soil cannot grow crops, until the exploration team find a huge coal mine. According to this story, without the exploration team, villagers will never know they have treasure; Without teachers in the class, students will hard to know to how to develop their advantage and personal ability. Therefore, although online education still can be one of the education concept with modernity, advancement advanced, and convenience, it could not replace of school education.