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The impact of the internet on Education Since the internet growth,more and more people choose to expand their knowledge by internet.There are people who will approve learning with internet,but there are also people who will criticize it.In my opinion,the impact of the internet on education is beneficial for us people. It's an undeniable that people highly rely on mighty internet power instead a traditional way.On the one hand,internet is high-speed and expanding largely,people can find anything through the internet by anytime.On the one hand,traditional learning skills cannot adopt the development of social.We must learn to change our mind and accept the internet's impact on education. One coin has two sides.We have no fear of the bad influence of the internet.A peaceful acceptance on internet will make us both winners.
