作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
As the internet growth, growing individuals choose a internet learning instead a traditional skill. And there are praise or criticism following. From my own perspective, it is a must for us to use the internet. Differences make a progress. The internet can help us step forward on social education. On the one hand, it's an undeniable that the internet is much more convenient and more adaptive to the high development social. Individuals can gain any information no matter where and when. On the other hand, the internet can expand our knowledge quickly. It will save our time and keep us having time to do anything else. One coin has two sides. We have no fear of the detrimental of the internet. A peaceful adoption on internet will make us both winners.