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2001年专八英语作文真题:网络对教育的影响

发布时间:2013-05-18 16:04浏览次数:5953
要求:
The Internet is about to take off in China. As many as 9 million people are online, a number that is estimated to hit 20 million by the end of 2000. It is predicted that this phenomenal growth will have great impact on our society and economy. Choose ONE aspect of our society or economy where you think the impact will be most strongly felt, and write an essay of about 300 words entitled.
THE IMPACT OF THE INTERNET ON ...
In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. Failur e to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
Write your composition on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。

用户练习作文:

As the internet growth, growing individuals choose a internet learning instead a traditional skill. And there are praise or criticism following. From my own perspective, it is a must for us to use the internet. Differences make a progress. The internet can help us step forward on social education. On the one hand, it's an undeniable that the internet is much more convenient and more adaptive to the high development social. Individuals can gain any information no matter where and when. On the other hand, the internet can expand our knowledge quickly. It will save our time and keep us having time to do anything else. One coin has two sides. We have no fear of the detrimental of the internet. A peaceful adoption on internet will make us both winners.

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