小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it? Dudu alway goes to walk with us after we are dinner