2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句数量偏少；词汇表达用的较丰富，另外请检查文章的单词拼写。

Strong will is a guarantee to succeeds ,there is a sentence says "Most of people can alive today ,less of them can instist until tommorow ,less and less of them can not see the sunshine afterday tommorow ". The reason why we can not see the sunshine ,becasue we can not insist on our dream . No one can finish a huge mission without strong will ,if Jack Ma haven't make a plan for the future and insit it these years ,we have no chance to open a store in Alibaba . Study is the same reason .