小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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My family have a dog. The dog's name is Dudu, and it is nine years, it is fatting due to it often eats pig-meat. Dudu wears a white coat, it has two bigger eyes and a smaller mouth. it was liked by my daughter, because it is lovely. Do you like it? Dudu always goes to stroll with us after we are dinner.