2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

复杂句使用不错，句法规范；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇量积累不错，一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活，有个别拼写错误。

Strong will is a guarantee to succeeds ,there is a sentence says "Most of people can alive today ,less of them can instist until tommorow ,less and less of them can not see the sunshine afterday tommorow ". The reason why we can not see the sunshine ,becasue we can not insist on our dream . No one can finish a huge mission without strong will ,if Jack Ma haven't make a plan for the future and insit it these years ,we have no chance to open a store in Alibaba . Study is the same reason ,there is a story about my friend ,he have kind of hobbies ,but he haven't focus one thing of them ,althought he is talent in English ,but he just cost less time in it ,and can not studying every day ,even alway play computer game,and now he can not find a good job . This story tell us , we need to use most of our time to one job we like ,pay attention on it ,dont wast your time ,nor you can not be a useful one in the world .