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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5946
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

I disagree the statement that living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people. Firstly, I consider that living in the city is very convenient. You can buy anythings you need simply and go to the other cities even other countries vastly and easily. For example, if I want to go to the United states of America, I must take a long-time-aircraft. And that means, I need to go to big cities in order to take the planes. And that probably takes about half an hour to an hour if I’m living in a big city. But, if I’m living in rural places, the traffic there is very inconvenient. So I need to take at go there for 2 hours by bus. Secondly, if you are living in the big city, then you can get higher education there than in rural places. Because big cities are very modern. So children there must be more knowledgeable so that they can lead the country to richness and powerfulness. And that means the people in big cities have better dispositions than people in rural places. So that we can develop ourselves more quickly. Finally, you can make friends easily in big cities. Because there’re more people in big cities, there’re more people with the same interest like you in the cities. Therefore you can make friends easily in big cities. With fellowship around you, you can develop yourself more relaxable and lastly. In conclusion, there’re many benefits when living in big cities. That’s why I consider that living in big cities is better than living in rural places.

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