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Should University Students Go in for Business? In this competitive society, a large number of college students believe that it's of great significance to acquire some practical experiences before graduation. Thus, an increasing number of university students are keen on going in for business so as to get good preparation for thier future career. Nevertheless, some teachers and students think that it's inappropriate to get involved in business in study time, which is detrimental to their study. As far as I am concerned, students should make great efforts to study hard instead of going in for business for their fisrt duty is to study, knowledge is the footstone for success and it's not late to do business after graduation. First and foremost, there is no bodut that students should give top priority to their studies. As students, we have to realize that it's never easy for parents to earn money for our study. What our parents most want to see is our progress in learning. Therefore, students are obliged to focus on learning rather than going in for business on the cost of study time. In addition, it's commonly accepted that knowledge can change one's fate，namely，knowledge is the stepping stone for final success. Thus, it's easy for us to recognize that if we want to accomplish something,we should attach great imortance to knowledge at first. More specifically, to acquire knowledge is to devote your efforts to learning instead of doing something unrelated such as business. Last but not least, we can also choose to go in for business after graduation. We all know that four years of university life is too short for us to get somewhere. Time is so precious that we can't miss every minute. Just like an old saying"Time is money",which means saving time is to save money. However, we are bound to have enough time to obtain social experience after graduation,so why not spare no pains to focus on study in university? To sum up, it's unwise to go in for business during study time. Not only because study is students' first task, but also because knowledge is the key to success. Apart from that, it's never late to acquire practical experience after graduation.
