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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文中词汇表达灵活多样，高级词汇使用熟练，但拼写错误要注意。
In recent years,there is a obviously phenomenon that information is explosing with the development of technology.Nowdays it is common to see that many people stare at their phone regardless of what is happened around.Generally speaking,a lot of what they see from the phone are unusefully to them. Because there are too many irrelevant information blending with the relevant information,we waste so much time on these irelevant information that we have not enough time to watch those irelevant information.so,this problem has become a threaten we have to face. Inorder to solve this problem,we need to cultivate good habits of watching,for example,we must focus on the useful information.
