2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；文中词汇表达灵活多样，高级词汇的使用还需加强。

I would like to show him the buautiful river near my hometown,there have countless fish and preety stones.when i was young ,i always went fishing witn my friend there.when spring comes,many kinds of birds sing in the river,what's more some beautiful wild flower came out quietly.sometimes we could spent the whole day there.the river has remind me my childhood which is free ang very happy.so i'd like to take my friend there,to see the lovely scence and call back the sweety times.