2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；可适当增加几条从句；文中高级词汇使用贫乏，还有些单词拼写错误。

I would like to show him the beautiful river near my hometown,there have a large number of fish and pretty stones. When i was young ,i always went fishing with my friends there. When spring comes,many kinds of birds sing in the river,what's more, some beautiful flowers came out quietly.sometimes we could spent the whole day there. The river has reminded me my childhood which is free ang very happy. So I'd like to bring my friend there, to see the lovely scenery and call back the sweety times.