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2015年高考作文优秀范文:中秋节

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:35浏览次数:9565
要求:
—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件,介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。
1. 写作要点:它是中国的传统节日之一;
2. 家人团聚;
3. 赏月、吃月饼;
4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好,不计人总词数。

参考词汇:

中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar

赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake
 

用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者句法基础较为扎实;文章词汇表达丰富,不过请增加高级词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

As we all know, the Mid-Autumn Festival is celebrated on August 15th of Chinese lunar calendar. Generally speaking, on that day, we are going to have a family reunion, which means all of our family memebers will get together to celebrate the special festival. What is interesting and pleasant is that we can eat different flavours of moon cakes. Apart from that, it's quite enjoyable that we are more likely to see the gorgeous full moon if the weather is good. Certainly, we can also have a trip with our family or go to visit our relatives. There is no denying fact that different places have different customs on the Mid-Autumn festival, what we should do is to respect these customs and enjoy the festival together.

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