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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者句法基础较为扎实;文章词汇表达丰富,不过请增加高级词汇的使用。
As we all know, the Mid-Autumn Festival is celebrated on August 15th of Chinese lunar calendar. Generally speaking, on that day, we are going to have a family reunion, which means all of our family memebers will get together to celebrate the special festival. What is interesting and pleasant is that we can eat different flavours of moon cakes. Apart from that, it's quite enjoyable that we are more likely to see the gorgeous full moon if the weather is good. Certainly, we can also have a trip with our family or go to visit our relatives. There is no denying fact that different places have different customs on the Mid-Autumn festival, what we should do is to respect these customs and enjoy the festival together.