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Everlasting Education in Our life Generally speaking, most people hold that going to schools or colleges is education,which is considered as a sort of means to secure a good job. While some other people claim that education is a lifelong process, which will not end until we die. Personally, I believe that education is everlasting in our whole life, because it's never too old to learn, education exists everywhere and education is not only knowledge on the books. To start with, as an old saying goes"it's never too old to learn", which means that we can secure education as long as we are alive. For instance, it's common to see some elderly people go to the university for the aged to acquire extra education, not only will they learn to keep fit, but also they will grasp a good knowledge of social changes as well as involvements, which totally demonstrates that education bears no relations with age. Moreover, there is no denying fact that education is around us, which can be found everywhere. It's not hard to realize that social experience can also be called a kind of education. More specifically, social experience educates us to contact with the society better and better. Another example is that we are bound to learn something from the people around us such as street cleaners or peasant-workers for their good spirits can be learned and praised. Futhhermore, we have to acknowledge that education is not just know-how on the books. Let's illustrate it more clearly, namely, knowledge from schools or universities is called education, whereas knowledge from social contact or practical experiences is also considered as education. Therefore, going to schools is not the only way to obtain education. In view of what have been listed above, a conclusion can naturally be summarized, that is, education is a lifelong process in that age is not an excuse to be educated, education exists everywhere and knowledge only on the books can't be called whole education.