小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

结构良好，但是语言不流畅；从句使用量不足；文中高级词汇不足。

my is fried good Lili is one of my best friend.She is twelve years old .She was born and Raised by her granny in Dahuang viliage Shizhen township Wannian county Jiangxi province. At the age of five,She was taken to Wenzhou city Zhejiang province to the effect that her parents can work hard for supporting her familly.She was a naughty and clever little girl,with a round face and two pure eyes.She was always smiling no matter some trouble came to her.Wow,I