题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇使用熟练灵活,但要注意避免拼写错误;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
It is believed taht the computer can do almost every thing.At tht time the computer was invented,scientist,carried away by its calculating speed,felt that they had created a miracle.It was gragually used not only in mathematics,physics,chemistry and astronomy,but in palces like the library,hospital and military army to replace the work of man.For the work of man.For this reason,the computer was entitled"Electronic Brain"in terms of appreation. Can man be controlled by computers?The answer is negative.Although a computer works much faster and accurately than man,a fact is undeniable;it is designed,manufactured and programmed by man,and therefore by human beings.Of course,science fictions have made up many fascinating stories about a computer,or rather robot,who conquers man and the earth,even the whole universe;however,ther are only unrealistic imagination.A horse help man a lot runs much faster than we,but it is only a slave. The future for the computer is very promising.With the help of it,we can do things that could not be done before,Conquering the universe,discovering new things,exolaining mystry phenomena puzzling us at present are all made possible by computer.