英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语四级> 真题> 2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71628
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
用户的作文(系统评分39.0分
评语:

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少;句式多变,多多练习从句的使用;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

China have a lot of beautiful city,but my most love is dangshan.becauae it's my hometown,it's also a wonderful city. dangshan is famous for pear in China,there are mang pear tree,the people is liveing with plant pear tree.the people is very nice,if you go to there,you will feel at home.nad if you go to there in march,you will see pear flowers all the around,it's very beautiful.the city likes a snow flower world.

会员评论0个评论)
阳光要晒在眼皮上
金币:1

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:91.0coco99400

人气:86发布:2016-12-22

得分:88.5aixuexi1234

人气:26发布:2016-06-06

得分:88.5shymsky

人气:43发布:2016-11-16

得分:88.0Chrisinny

人气:76发布:2014-10-09

得分:88.02011213045

人气:74发布:2015-04-21