2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；高级词汇的积累方面还有很大的空间，另外请检查文章的单词拼写。

As far as i am concerned,the world consis of conmunication. I can not image that the world had no conmunication what would happen. Due to the conmunication with other,we can get more information that can give us indiactes to our life and work. Thanks to the conmunication with other,we can get idea that can change the word.For example,There are so much inventions were invented by the together work depended on conmunication.