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字数:300 满分:100分
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加从句的使用;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
How Be Smart Consumption Recently a topic about what is the smart consumption for many of us students have being discussed hotly.As far as I am concerned,for a student,like collecting all kinds of coupons or looking for group-buy deals when we eat out that way are smart consumptions. My mom told me to be a save girl when I was young and I never forget it.Whenever I want to buy something I would think again.Once I wanted to buy a new bike ,unfortunally, I had no enough money at that time,so I had to give up and found another way.A few days later I got a sencond-hand bike from my school mate. therefore ,I saved a lttile money. For my part,there are many way of saving money but we should choose appropriate one,be smart and be selective.