文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;语言不流畅。
In three year,our environment beginning get more And more badly.You may see haze almost every day! We must do action to keep our environment well! Maybe we Can plant more trees and grass, not throw litter everywhere,ride a bike or Go to school on foot.Maybe everyone Just do a little...... I think,if everyone Can think more of others.We will Have a better living environment!